Day 1: Fish Island and Day 2: The rickety bridge

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Mysteriously, the gigantic creature began to move.There was a thump and another thump and another the house owners awoke to the noise to check what was going on.The thought it must be coming from under the water so they put there swimming gear on and went under water to find the huge creature rotating itself, they knew they had to get out quick.They darted back into there house and grabbed there most valuable things, while they were gathering there stuff the wife looked through the window.They were really moving.They could see ripples in the water below it sounded like thunder streaming through the walls and in to the tiny cracks of the floor that made it rumble.the quickly rushed out the door before there house collapsed into a thousand pieces and then they rowed in there tiny boat to the island next to them and when they turned around the island was gone all you could see were bubbles.

Day 2: The rickety bridge


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Full of excitement, the girl rushed to the bridge.Carefully, she stepped on each plank while she barely breathed.Each  step she took gave a out an irritating creaking sound.As she tip toed down the bridge it started to shake and quickly the rods that held up the bridge snapped.Rapidly, the bridge fell and the girl nearly slipped and fell to her death when she grasped onto the remainders of the bridge.With all her might she pulled up onto the bridge and climbed up like a ladder. But one of the steps were rotten and her leg fell, she slipped and was only holding on with one hand.All of her blood was coursing through her vanes and her heart was beating as fast as a cheetah.Down below she would fall in to the icy blue water but then she would be quickly devoured, so she kept  pulling and pulling......