Here is my sick sentence

The man walked up the slope. He used poles. The sun was bright. The sky was blue. He looked forward to the view from the top.

Heavily breathing, a man hiked up Mount Everest and even though the sun was shinning brightly in the sky he was as cold as ice.The sky was a bright and vibrant blue the he stretched his neck up towards the top of the Mountain waiting to see that breathing taking view of being on the top of the world.